w.a.l.t eat a mellow puff the way I tell you.
S.C
simple and clear
title
list instructions
list equipment
equipment:
a head
a hand
a mellow puff
- eat around the side of the mallow puff.
- grab the mellow puff (using hand), hit your forehead (the part of your head below your hair) with the mellow puff. Repeat until cracked like glass.
- eat chocolate until left with chocolate on bottom and biscuit and marshmallow.
- eat the marshmallow and biscuit
P.S I suggest you try this, it's the best way to eat it EVER!
hey will I like how you used equipment so they know what they need that is awesome.I like how you did your instructions step by step maybe next time try not use your head because hair might fall in it
ReplyDeleteHi William, we really like how you made your blog post easy to read and it was nice and simple. We think it was cheeky and funny- especially your WALT. Have you thought about checking your capital letters and trying to use colour in your work? Could you include a picture of you eating a mallow puff?
ReplyDeleteFrom Room 15 at New Windsor School.
Great work.I really like the way you wrote your instructs clear and simple. Next time you should check your capital letters at the beginning of the sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi William,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a different kinda post for your blog and its a amazing one too.I liked how you showed us home done (Known as your body) for your mallow puff eating it must be yum i don't really like marshmallow but I might try it.Next time could you try it do a differnt eating like a pro.
Kind Regards
Keelee